Mama Cried by Talia Haven
Jenny was enjoying herself on the swings when Azula, one of the guardians of the playground came to take her away.
Together they journey to a cinder building where Jenny must make a powerful decision.
Together they journey to a cinder building where Jenny must make a powerful decision.
wait, what?,
This review is from: Mama Cried (Kindle Edition)
*I received this book free in exchange for an honest review*
I don't understand what the heck I just read. I can understand what the author is trying to portray, but it was not done well. I felt lost, confused, and could only partially understand what was going on.
I got that the girl was dead and trying to understand that. She remember her mom cried. But.. the why and who... and what.. I was lost. It was a confusing, poorly portrayed short story. Yes, I understand it's short, and was a 10 minute read, but I would have been mad had I spent my money on this book. It certainly did not entice me. It did not excite me. I spent the whole time saying to myself "what am I reading?" I think the author could have put a little more time into developing this story into something enjoyable. Besides having no clue what's going on, I feel like I have no clue who the main character is.
I just can't find it in me to rate it any higher and wonder what the other reviewers read, to be able to rate it so high.
I don't understand what the heck I just read. I can understand what the author is trying to portray, but it was not done well. I felt lost, confused, and could only partially understand what was going on.
I got that the girl was dead and trying to understand that. She remember her mom cried. But.. the why and who... and what.. I was lost. It was a confusing, poorly portrayed short story. Yes, I understand it's short, and was a 10 minute read, but I would have been mad had I spent my money on this book. It certainly did not entice me. It did not excite me. I spent the whole time saying to myself "what am I reading?" I think the author could have put a little more time into developing this story into something enjoyable. Besides having no clue what's going on, I feel like I have no clue who the main character is.
I just can't find it in me to rate it any higher and wonder what the other reviewers read, to be able to rate it so high.
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