Monday, May 12, 2014

In Bed With The Boss

In Bed With The Boss by Alexa Bravo

A high-flying corporate romance that’s sure to add ‘elevator’ to your list of erotic destinations!
Trish Carter is chasing the career opportunity of a lifetime, and nothing is going to stand in her way.  After a failed marriage and years of self-doubt, she needs her business proposal to succeed — but there’s one hurdle left: presenting to the Board of Directors and charismatic CEO, Keith Donnelli. So then it can only be the stress and extreme tension that leads her to jump the hot stranger in the elevator…
But the unexpectedly explosive encounter puts all her plans in jeopardy, when the stranger isn’t a stranger at all. Now, her whole future rides on how well she can resist the temptation of sleeping with her boss. Will Trish finally have the chance to make her secret dreams come true or will following her heart destroy her chance at a future?

In Bed With the BossIn Bed With the Boss by Alexa Bravo
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This could be a great story! I liked the plot and enjoyed the fact that the characters were older and more mature. What I disliked, is the long winded inner dialogue that repeated itself over and over and went on and on. Get the point? This would be a great short story, or even leaves room for expansion, but there's so little dialogue and more thoughts for each character than anything worthwhile. I found myself skipping past several pages at a time just to continue a conversation or scene.

I think some of this story needs to be cut and analyzed. It just drags down what could be a sweet office romance. I loved the struggle between the two on should they or shouldn't they do it. I enjoyed that.

Then, we get to the end. After allllll the long winded parts... it's over in like 2 pages. What? Was the author rushed? Did they forget to finish the story? What happened? With some work, this could be good. I suppose you'll just have to see for yourself.

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